Emmahaving established your line of argument in paragraph 1, ensure you start providing evidence to support your claims as soon as possible. Choosing themention the Avengers as part of your topic sentence for P2 is possibly not the best start as that film garnered both critical acclaim and high box office receipts, it might be a better example for a film which combined success with excellent production practices. If you are using the Avengers then identify the audience for the film, specify how they were targetted through a variety of marketing campaignsFor TGBH identify that audience by using the YouGov profiler software. Again you must be specific about the marketing techniques employed by the film, use the research completed in class to help you. If you're going to claim it received greater critical acclaim then prove it, the examiner wont allow you to make points without evidence.TargetsSupport every point you make with evidnece.Try and provide a range of examples.Use all the films we have studied.