Emma, this is a very good attempt. You attempt to provide opinion and examples in equal measure throughout your writing. You could extend your thinking and develop your argument by considering whether the film would have benefited from more publicity (you state the film won an award for its trailer). Another area to develop is the use of terminology when discussing audience types, look back at the ppt I made and decide which category would best describe the audience.Finally, was the film expected to fail? Look closely at the funding raised pre production, what does this tell us about how much faith companies and investors had in the film?Well done Emma.